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Kiami
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PostSubject: Poem!   Thu Oct 30, 2008 3:19 pm

From the past mistakes that happed
From the times that we've been through

How can you still hold me?
From what I put you through

I betrayed
I lied
But to protect you
And you let it slide?

I don't really get it
what runs through your mind?
When you see me act like this
Are you truely blind

I can't take it anymore
I looked from above
I think im sure
Your my true love

I wont betray
I wont lie
I wont anymore
I promise to try

Keep me close
Keep me by
Keep me in the heart
Thats warm inside

Never cold
Never mean
these feelings fly
I will never say goodbye...
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Thu Oct 30, 2008 3:26 pm

It's a very beautiful poem, and it shows some powerful emotions in it. Truely a great poem Kai!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Thu Oct 30, 2008 3:36 pm

Awwe, thanks
jake-kun. ^-^
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Thu Oct 30, 2008 3:59 pm

This is beautiful Kia ^_^ Great job.
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I will share the air I breathe,
I'll give you my heart on a string,
I just don't wanna miss anything.
Say my name. I just want to hear you.
Say my name. So I know it's true.
You're changing me. You're changing me.


We'll make the imagination real, someday Abby.
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Fri Oct 31, 2008 4:27 am

Awe, amazing Nicole! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Fri Oct 31, 2008 6:53 pm

This is cute!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:19 pm

greatly done with good emotions, kia.
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Forever more loving you, Lii..you are the singing in my heart through and through
As the tide rises and falls, my love says it all
Kita, my close friend 4ever & always
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:32 pm

i loved it, the emotion you put into it was beautiful.
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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Thu Nov 13, 2008 4:01 am

kawaii..X3
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Im trying to be the sweetest person for him as he was trying to do the same for me....

I Dont want a happy ending..

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PostSubject: Re: Poem!   Sat Nov 22, 2008 2:49 pm

I keep reading this one, too. xDD
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