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Dark Pearl
Genin
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 |  Subject: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1)  Sun Feb 07 2010, 15:33 | |
| " A sad day for us,huh,sis. Raven's little sister named Nikendra said. "Yes, it is little sis." Raven said. "Why did steve die again." Nikendra said "He died because he had a heartattack." Raven said. "Ohh,will goodnight,big sis. Nikendra said. The next day at school," I feel like I didn't have ant friends.Darrian-san seems to be avoiding me. I wonder." raven said in her thoughts. " Lets look back at page 92 for Review." Mrs. marshall said to the class. " oh great now I have to stay awake for the time being. Raven said. After Mrs. Marshall's class, it was time for science class. "well, lets see how my day goes." Raven said; Until a note was placed on her desk. She looked up and saw her ex-boyfriend, Darrian walking away. " I wonder what he wants." raven said again as she opened the note. Note says: Are you okay? am sorry for your lost. and hope for you and....... nvm am sorry for your lost. " hmm, I wonder."Raven said without writing back on the note. In the afternoon around the time for social studies class. "see stars". Raven's friend named , Avery said. "Man, shut the h*ll up". Raven said. "I'm ready to go home." Raven said again. "Please realse students for Bus 231, thats for Bus 231." theacconments speaker said. "D**n, I hate thing." Avery said. well, people I was to lazy to go on with this story but be ready for chapter 2. _________________ no one to talk to, to care for,nothing at all. just a dark place foretold ~dark pearl~ MY sister: Reshii-chan  | Spoiler: | | |  |
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|  | | Juhnari
Genin
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Age: 13
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 16:46 | |
| wow! whens chapter 2! can't wait. plus lazy is bad. _________________ I don't care how mad you are at me. am always there for you. even if it takes me a min or two, just think of me! like I think of you. ~Juhnari~ | Spoiler: | | | MY FAMILY:
my father- Black heart
my mother - GL
my sisters & brothers- Rin , Cuppy, toshii ,reshii , temari, shiro
my cousins- dark Pearl ,Nikpl , and KOB
my uncle- kazekage Q
auntie- abby
grandpa-des |
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| | | | ninjakid23
Genin
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 18:57 | |
| very good!! cant wait for chpt2
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[three by four days equals seven life times]
[ they do say smart floats what about the idiots?]
(world domitation newbie expert expolsions handler for my sanity dont ask why I joined)
( please dont break me more please heal me with all your heart) Arashixnina
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| | | | Toshii
Chuunin
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What's up Tab:  Toshiro~ ^_^ x3
LOL i have 30 nicknames! xD
I love chocolate~
My mind is a complicated thing even to me.
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 21:49 | |
| nice~ can't wait for chappy 2~ :3 _________________ | Spoiler: | | | 
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"I'd prefer chocolate over men...except Toshiro..." -Toshii
Daddy - Black heart
Uncle - Q, Makoto
Auntie - Abby, Makiko
Grandpa -Destinykil
Mom - GL
My Bros & Sisters - Rin, Juhnari, Shiro, ThiCuppy, Reshii, Temari, KittyQ
Sensei - Darkflame
Cookie Bud - Gaara12
Cousins - Pearl, Nikpl, KOB, YukiAkane, Zergio & Runo~
♥~Toshii X Jay~♥ |
| | | | UreshiiChan
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| | | | | Dark Pearl
Genin
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Mon Feb 08 2010, 08:02 | |
| thanks I'm glad you all like the story. and i'll go back and check it later on. _________________ no one to talk to, to care for,nothing at all. just a dark place foretold ~dark pearl~ MY sister: Reshii-chan | Spoiler: | | | |
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| | | | Nikpl
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Wed Feb 10 2010, 20:12 | |
| check grammer pearl-chan
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all the days are past and nothing lasts!
am the cutest little thing of all
but don't under estimate me
for I am the loveable bunny!
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| | | | Dark Pearl
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Wed Feb 10 2010, 20:48 | |
| fine and done I checked my grammer _________________ no one to talk to, to care for,nothing at all. just a dark place foretold ~dark pearl~ MY sister: Reshii-chan | Spoiler: | | | |
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| | | | ninjakid23
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| | Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Wed Feb 10 2010, 22:36 | |
| heh ^_^
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