Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1)

**Dark Pearl** · Subject: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 16:33

" A sad day for us,huh,sis. Raven's little sister named Nikendra said.

"Yes, it is little sis." Raven said.

"Why did steve die again." Nikendra said

"He died because he had a heartattack." Raven said.

"Ohh,will goodnight,big sis. Nikendra said.

The next day at school," I feel like I didn't have ant friends.Darrian-san seems to be avoiding me. I wonder." raven said in her thoughts. " Lets look back at page 92 for Review." Mrs. marshall said to the class. " oh great now I have to stay awake for the time being. Raven said.

After Mrs. Marshall's class, it was time for science class. "well, lets see how my day goes." Raven said; Until a note was placed on her desk. She looked up and saw her ex-boyfriend, Darrian walking away. " I wonder what he wants." raven said again as she opened the note.

Note says: Are you okay? am sorry for your lost. and hope for you and....... nvm am sorry for your lost.

" hmm, I wonder."Raven said without writing back on the note.

In the afternoon around the time for social studies class. "see stars". Raven's friend named , Avery said. "Man, shut the h*ll up". Raven said. "I'm ready to go home." Raven said again. "Please realse students for Bus 231, thats for Bus 231." theacconments speaker said. "D**n, I hate thing." Avery said.

well, people I was to lazy to go on with this story but be ready for chapter 2.

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no one to talk to, to care for,nothing at all. just a dark place foretold ~dark pearl~
MY sister: Reshii-chan

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**Juhnari** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 17:46

wow! whens chapter 2! can't wait. plus lazy is bad.

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I don't care how mad you are at me.
am always there for you.
even if it takes me a min or two,
just think of me!
like I think of you.
~Juhnari~

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	MY FAMILY: my father- Black heart my mother - GL my sisters & brothers- Rin , Cuppy, toshii ,reshii , temari, shiro my cousins- dark Pearl ,Nikpl , and KOB my uncle- kazekage Q auntie- abby grandpa-des

**NightKitsuneQ** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 19:57

very good!! cant wait for chpt2

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I know nothing is destructible; things merely change forms.When the consciousness we know as life ceases, I know that I shall still be part and parcel of the world. I was a part before the sun rolled into shape and burst forth in the glory of change. ~ part of a quote by Zora neale hurston~
ArashixSune ( sune = nina)

**Toshii** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Sun Feb 07 2010, 22:49

nice~ can't wait for chappy 2~ :3

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"With your smartest brain and giant heart; you rock out loud." -Jay ♥~Toshii X Jay~♥

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ShiiShii forever~
ToshXReshXPKXZerg

**UreshiiQ** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Mon Feb 08 2010, 03:05

Nice! ^_^ You might wanna check your grammer, though :O

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Damnit James Taylor whatda gotta be singing about prostitutes to the children for!?
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**Dark Pearl** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Mon Feb 08 2010, 09:02

thanks I'm glad you all like the story. and i'll go back and check it later on.

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no one to talk to, to care for,nothing at all. just a dark place foretold ~dark pearl~
MY sister: Reshii-chan

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**Nikpl** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Wed Feb 10 2010, 21:12

check grammer pearl-chan

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all the days are past and nothing lasts!
am the cutest little thing of all
but don't under estimate me
for I am the loveable bunny!

**Dark Pearl** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Wed Feb 10 2010, 21:48

fine and done I checked my grammer

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no one to talk to, to care for,nothing at all. just a dark place foretold ~dark pearl~
MY sister: Reshii-chan

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**NightKitsuneQ** · Subject: Re: Sad But Still Lonely (chapter 1) Wed Feb 10 2010, 23:36

heh ^_^

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I know nothing is destructible; things merely change forms.When the consciousness we know as life ceases, I know that I shall still be part and parcel of the world. I was a part before the sun rolled into shape and burst forth in the glory of change. ~ part of a quote by Zora neale hurston~
ArashixSune ( sune = nina)